A birthday surprise! #Limerick


To give her father a birthday surprise,

She draws a heart with her art supplies.

Glittered card makes him happy,

Cluttered hall makes him snappy.

To clean the mess he lets out deep sighs.


P.S: This is  my first attempt to write a limerick.  It is written for Limerick Poetry Challenge prompt 

As always, your feedback is appreciated.

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