To give her father a birthday surprise,
She draws a heart with her art supplies.
Glittered card makes him happy,
Cluttered hall makes him snappy.
To clean the mess he lets out deep sighs.
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P.S: This is my first attempt to write a limerick. It is written for Limerick Poetry Challenge prompt .
As always, your feedback is appreciated.
Aww…that’s such a lovely surprise for the father! 🙂
Thank you for participating! 🙂
Thanks, Rashmi 🙂
Lovely! What a sweet birthday gift (except for the mess! LOL!)
Thanks, Joy 🙂 Kids always are like that. 🙂
Yes! Very sweet!
Lovely surprise…
awww! this is cute and sweet~ thank you for sharing(:
Thanks so much 🙂
Lovely. 🙂
Thank you😊
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